Fortifications of the Heart

Petrified to let others in;
building walls where necessary,
fortifying those too weak.
One always finds the cracks;
often changing the heart within.
Damage is done; another
layer added and moving on.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Your title drew me in....clever and quirky way to make a point. Like this relatable piece a lot.

[Ebb and Flow]

Thank you very much! :)

[B-poet]

A clever & unique short write. Great work. Loved the overall conveyed message you've gotten across throughout this piece. An intriguing read. :)

[Ebb and Flow]

Thank you very much. Sometimes the short writes are the best. :D