The Exam

The Exam

A Poem by Connor Ure
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A confrontation n myself about the nature of selfhood and identity.

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I took a peak of the paper,
the answer sheet for the exam,
and it broke my heart - that traitor!
for I couldn't give what I have.

My sheet was as thin as wafer,
as thick as the fleece of lamb.

Of course, I was searching for the answers
to the question of who
I am.

A predefined essence -
As lit from the stars' luminescence,
a space carved for my unique presence,
is what I'm asking
for which, in essence, is senseless!

That I deny myself choice,
In fear of my voice;
That I am somehow safer,
demanding answers from a
blank sheet of paper,
for an exam with no
marks to score.

© 2016 Connor Ure


Author's Note

Connor Ure
Do you get what I'm trying to say, are any bits clunky or obscure. Did you actually enjoy it? Do you want me to check your work out! Will put in effort for those who do the same.

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A spot on example of modern poetry, very beautiful to the ears.

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Added on May 5, 2016
Last Updated on May 5, 2016
Tags: Poem, metaphysical, life, exam, paper, me, self, philosophy, universe

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Connor Ure
Connor Ure

Christchurch, New Zealand



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Hey there. I'm an aspiring poet and short story writer. Love anime and Japanese video games, films and meeting people. I don't let my judgements stop me from getting to know anyone, so feel free to es.. more..