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A Poem by Corset
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Intrinsic motivation: be careful what you think, it might become someone's poetry.

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A fish on a line
wild berries from a vine
no paper, no pens
no fences to mend 
a horse blanket
we shook and banked it
on bare-backed summer days.



he's a natural 
bridge
to shake up the palette
to feed the audience


he placed his hands on the
throne of my weary soul and fed
the hungered sorrow

to set you free 

he fears his error
awakened

a truth 
he doesn't want me to know
even though
I've kept all his secrets
hidden in my heart,
a tropical paradise.

civil
when have I not 
been 
civil.
Has there ever been a cause?
Well then
If I be a teller of untruths
perhaps he hears my mind.
maybe then,
I do not truly wish to be freed.

© 2023 Corset


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that would be really strange wouldn't it....if someone could just read our minds and turn our thoughts out on the page, verbatim.
If that happened we would never have to touch the keyboard again....just stay around this person and let him or her put us down on paper.
It is funny, if we don't have freedom we want it...but if we have it...we would rather give it up for love.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

1 Year Ago

well said and thank you for ...C



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What a finish to what a beginnings, Relic. No need to speak, not sure..but who tells the bells to stop. When it comes to you , can strike a pose, beckon then wait for loud applause? Fun time agony or game, the choice is yours" A mystery, drama or comedy - take your pick..

'civil
when have I not
been
civil.
Has there ever been a cause?
Well then
If I be a teller of untruths
perhaps he hears my mind.
maybe then,
I do not truly wish to be freed.'
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


that would be really strange wouldn't it....if someone could just read our minds and turn our thoughts out on the page, verbatim.
If that happened we would never have to touch the keyboard again....just stay around this person and let him or her put us down on paper.
It is funny, if we don't have freedom we want it...but if we have it...we would rather give it up for love.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

1 Year Ago

well said and thank you for ...C

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Corset
Corset

San Antonio, TX



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