From The Beginning

To whomever this makes sense.

From The Beginning

It was supposed to be you.

understand.

You didn't want to know

so 

therefore,

there was no one to tell.

His last words were "F**k"

He loved you very much.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A negative feel to the words dear Corset. Last words, first words. We shall keep. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my dear friend.
Coyote

[Crowley]

I think it may go this way more often than not. It's the center stanza that takes this in many directions at once, a field of flowers where treasures are found or snakes, we don't see them anyway cuz we can't even see out shoes. I think that last word is spot on, realistic. When you say below in Yes review that the pope said I love you god, I just think they left out the F**k to make it PG, you know a caption that reads Smoking, Violence and Death but some of us turn the channel because it doesn't say Sex and Nudity, Cool writing, I loved it!

[Corset]

Thanks for stopping in Crowley, so nice to see everyone trickling back in for winter poetry time :D

[Ken Simm.]

Classic. An enigma wrapped in a beautiful complex problem shown in a few words that make sense to someone. Yes.
I envy and then don't dependong on mood.

[Corset]

One word "Pope" lol, lawd, no need for envy its quite rotten. They said his last words were "I love you God"

[Kelly Scheppers]

To whomever. The enormity of these words will fall like a hammer, I'm sure. Love the enigma attached to it!

[Corset]

Thank you Kelly!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Still peeking in the mind space I see...Ive missed the answers...but its always been you :)

[Corset]

Thud! I really thought you'd ran away with the circus or something! Where have you been?? Omg I hope all is well, no sickies or anything. I love the twist to your name! Did you ever read the book?

[willweb]

Yeah, I could feel that and it didn't feel good. Thankfully I am not the one whom this makes sense to, even though it does. Kind of cryptic, very cool.

[Corset]

Thank you Willweb, glad it's not you :D

[Chris Shaw]

This is sad. To die in those circumstances not knowing that his love was known and accepted by a significant other is truly a sadness. Communication or lack of it can have dire consequences.

Chris

[Corset]

Thanks Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

he died so disappointed, you never knew he loved you....
he never got to tell you...
for whatever reasons.
j.

[Corset]

Thanks, J.