Miracle

Miracle

The Rose set sun

on a restless sea

breathless moonlit crags

Midnite on moonshine

beneath lacy clouds of Ghosts

that haunt the moon drifting

across a navy black pinstripe

of stars

a moon sinks behind the pines

Miracle the difference between

night and day.

A Golden crack of dawn

the sun comes round again

the Earth looks flat beneath 

seagulls surfing in the sun

A red sunset on cat o' nines

Miracle

Halos on the wheat head

in the crimson time of day

when the 5 o'clock sun 

stretches into shadows

looming at the hedge.

Reviews

[Anuja Sharma]

How can you possibly portray the God's landscape through words? well, here it is..
A beautiful sun spreading redness in the sky over blue sea, well explained.
Thanks for the write.
Much love,
Anu

[Corset]

Thank you Anu

[Ken Simm.]

Remarkable descriptive piece. Sunset over a varied landscape. I particularly like the ghosts. Fine use of metaphor.

[Corset]

Thank you for your kind words friend.

[Ruth]

Captures the beauty so very well Corset. This is a delight to behold and visualise. A really lovely journey for the mind to reflect on :)

[Corset]

omagosh what a cute kitten, and lovely pic of you too Ruth a true joy shining in them, cats rock :D Thank you for stopping in.

[Chris Shaw]

Stunning imagery here. Great description. I love watching night slide into day and vice versa. That is a miracle to me. Such a wonderful contrast Corset. Whether sunrise or sunset, I'll be watching.

Chris

[Corset]

it truly is each and every day. Thank you Chris :D

[Chris Shaw]

A pleasure poet :)

[Chris]

A soft vision behind the eyes.

[Corset]

Most appreciated Chris, Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

every part of the day is a miracle...
Life is a miracle and just that we get to see it, experience it...how lucky are we!!

and you do description as well as anyone I have ever read....including all the poets we teach in school.
j.

[Corset]

Thank you Jacob, means quite a bit coming from one who knows :D