Corkscrew

Corkscrew

A Poem by Corset
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Corkscrew

Every day beautiful
Snowflakes
get your tire off
Don't worry
We're hiding in the darkness
our love 
is covered in daydreams
but it's too far
you know my thoughts
but
His Nibs is empty
so push your plate again
Hold your hands up there
every morning she wakes up and
cuts herself on the Sun
it's a neighbors chair
yeah, it shows
15 hands
that held you down
so take your time
take it or leave it.

© 2021 Corset


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This is almost too harsh & raw to think about. I applaud you for addressing this & for doing that in an unflinching style (((HUGS)))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Corset

3 Years Ago

Thank you again, its something that's heavily been on my mind of late, since we are still friends on.. read more
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Gee
Hmmm, hard to put into words the disgust, hatred felt towards any man that could do this to a woman. God forbid this happen to my child as prison would be no deterrent for me seeking blood.
If this you then I am truly sorry.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Corset

3 Years Ago

Hi gee, thank you, no thankfully not me, but someone close to me about 40 plus some odd years ago an.. read more
Rape is a sickness. A world sickness. I don't understand. Women are our grandmothers, mother, sisters, daughters and wife. Powerful words shared dear Corset.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Corset

3 Years Ago

I can't understand it either, you are a beautiful soul Coyote. Thank you
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Corset.
Fifteen hands that held you down. That says it all. Rape. The victim's life is changed forever. These wounds don't heal. Tough to read Corset.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


Corset

3 Years Ago

Thank you Chris for your kind comments, no they don't heal, I never bring it up. It been so many yea.. read more
15 hands that should be cut off, along with a couple other things.
tragic....
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Corset

3 Years Ago

I so agree J. Kids out drinking at that age can befall all sorts of tragic events if they put themse.. read more
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Pax
Sad, sad reality, deep wounds takes time, lots and lots of it, trouma of this caliber need more self healing and tons of support... Your hands are full my friend and I applaud your support to the one who needs it...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Corset

3 Years Ago

How astute of you to realize this is very close to home and the report meerly a trigger for it. yes .. read more
This write so fits the title and although a lot sounds very personal , it allows the resder to become involved according to their own experience. A tour de force indeed.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Corset

3 Years Ago

Ken, oh my word! how have you been? It's been ages, I have to visit very soon! I hope all is well!
Ken Simm.

3 Years Ago

I been becoming a cyborg with two new knees but I am fine now. how are you my friend?
Corset

3 Years Ago

Bionic, indestructible, better.. :P Cyborgs are artificial intelligence which you are not :D

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Added on October 16, 2021
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