Ceremony

Dedicated to: "to finding THE ONE"

Ceremony:

Definition- A cause on fire

whispers in my ear

like the wind outside my window

it's real

A daze in summer

A different time zone

maybe

dimension

let me know

He's out there somewhere

beneath the branches

under the psychedelic leaves

under some "Polly A*s Nip"

with fake blonde hair 

brown like a native

with legs

that stretch to planet Venus,

but I'll find him 

some how,

somewhere

with his cause on fire

All his hair

 flickering with flames.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I so envy your creative flair! Wow! This is expression WAY outside the dots & I love it. This is what I hunger for, as I read masses of predictable stuff. Your wildly-imaginative ideas are loosely-connected, but still with an easy-to-follow commentary for someone like myself who doesn't read abstract easily (((HUGS)))

[Corset]

You are so sweet to me Barleygirl, thank you!

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Celebration follows every success, and success come when you never stop trying or finding.
I like the positivity in the line "but I'll find him".
A positive energy that guarantee success.

[Corset]

Thank you for your kind comments.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem dear Corset.
"some how,
somewhere
with his cause on fire
All his hair
flickering with flames"
The above lines were my favorite. When we seek, can we find? Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Corset]

lol, thank you Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.