Long Haul

Long Haul

A Poem by Corset

Long haul
Had a rough night
The body and the flesh
pleasures and appetites
Tow rags
wide load
diamond nails and blue jeans
bugs like me
there is no reason to be afraid
with a little petrol
fire can ride the waves.

© 2020 Corset


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' .. .. with a little petrol - fire can ride the waves.'

According to the main part of your post, fire can certainly ride the waves.. and is proved. in great semi (?) metaphorical form, Rather think that in this case, fear probably fans the flames, Happens.

Posted 4 Years Ago


emmajoy

4 Years Ago

I remember a time.. .. .. nevahhhhhh again!
Corset

4 Years Ago

now Emma, Never say Never!
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

Okay for ten .. !
Petrol relight and the night is back on.
A hangover is an excuse to drink more.
Why do people say they couldn't do it again.


Posted 4 Years Ago


Corset

4 Years Ago

wimps that's why :p
I remember in my youth....didn't need nights, or sleep...reckless abandon was the formula...
Appetites for skin and sin and seventh sojourns...
love this piece, Corset.
Can't believe E and I are the only two reviews...this is a gem.

j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Corset

4 Years Ago

love and The Moody Blues, always the best reviews, where did you run off too? Welcome back any ol' w.. read more
whoa! danger danger danger ... pity the moths who can not resist the light in this one Corset .. there is deep mystery in this one says i! not sure i want any further explanation ;))))) i was cpativated title to closing .. well done says i!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Corset

4 Years Ago

Will Robinson, that does not compute! heh, Thank you Einstein Noodle, I believe i'm over due!
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

well ... truckers can be a rough go ... especially for drunk bugs in the headlights of their rigs ;).. read more

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Added on July 30, 2020
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