Boudoir Wars

Boudoir Wars

A Poem by Corset
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BDO in the bedroom

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He says: We are going to settle this amicably
and then, I'm  gonna kill you.
She said: I have every right to win this war
He said: I'm bringing a machine gun...
She said: you probably should, you're gonna need it.

© 2020 Corset


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This one struck me at two different levels. One was humour as the two have a lovers tiff and she stands her ground and two a more serious affair all together as real domestic violence is offered. Nicely set.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Corset

4 Years Ago

Thank you , not real though . :P
So feisty, such a punch. I love the dialogue here. Reminds me of a different era. Gone but not forgotten.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


Corset

4 Years Ago

Hi Chris! Thank you!
Hepburn and Tracy... are called to mind... and their heart.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Corset

4 Years Ago

Thank you Chris , hiya!
Delivered with punch. Great visuals within. Thank you

Posted 4 Years Ago


Corset

4 Years Ago

Thank you Troy!
yes ... like Bad bunny says .. Hepburn and Grant .. or James Cagney and Bette Davis ;)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58Ty5UVOaEM
the dialogue form is strong and the scene is surprisingly set in so few words and lines .. good stuff says i! :)))))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Corset

4 Years Ago

lol, "there are only two guys in this world the guys that caught and the guys that don't!" Thank you.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

:) ...................good stuff Corset .. i love your handle by the way ... such a turn on even at .. read more
Corset

4 Years Ago

thank you :P
Heh, That's awesome , Thank you Robert, great visual, love Hepburn.

Posted 4 Years Ago


LOL I love it and had you pegged as a formidable soul the first time I read you. i can hear this dialogue between Grant and Hepburn in a grainy gritty Howard Hawks film

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Corset
Corset

San Antonio, TX



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