Boomerang

Boomerang

A Poem by Corset
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An estranged couple consider...

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He says: You won't regret this
She smiles: The beginning
He says: your thoughts?
She says: Margarita?
She says: Did you recover?
He says: just give me a minute, 
(back to the phone)
He says: I'm going to die
She: ...
She says: well, as usual you are going about it all wrong!
Pause

(someone wants me to give an edge to this guy
so....)

He says: Not if you come with me!

© 2020 Corset


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Corset

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what a pick up line.....or maybe a re-pick up line.
if you don't get back with me i will die.
her reaction is to have a drink...and tell him what to do, maybe like she had a habit of that.

well, you present a scenario...we could put ourselves into this when reminded of a situation from the past...or maybe the present.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Corset

4 Years Ago

yeah exactly like she had a habit of that telling him "you know what's wrong with you is..." don't w.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

4 Years Ago

no, that was clear...and his pick up line was to get her to die with him...
Corset

4 Years Ago

no one likes to die alone? except maybe elephants

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