"I am here my beloved"

I am here my beloved

Spoken from the mouth 

ravine...

how everyone goes before

 the magistery

even

the daughter who loves to ride horses

but when left alone...

I am here my beloved

how quickly their eyes turn wild

whoa man or beast

with not a soul to work them.

we will take all the gable 

properties over

by storm and 

at a return,

nephroid be damned.

Now, I can't do anything with this woman ok?

 I am here my beloved.

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

as a child in high school, part adult the other part frozen in inhospitable desire, I learned, and recited often, Walter Benton's "This is My Beloved". I practiced saying the different chapters, vulnerable and unfurled, just waiting for someone to come alone so I could spring the verses on to. But even if no one ever came I never disobeyed the guiding principle of love poetry. To never think it unlucky to have read it. You're amazing......dana

[Corset]

Thank you for stopping in, I can really see you doing that , memorizing to pounce. some folks tire of love stories, I'm happy to hear you are not one of them.

[Lydia Shutter]

Interesting use of font and color in this one. A bit confusing, but the message comes across. Well written. Lydi**

[Corset]

Thank you for stopping in Lydi :D

[Chris]

I've sat with and beside at "passings" as well as "waitings"... it's what beloveds do.

[Corset]

Thank you Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

super heady and like a waking dream of some kind .. your characters are confused for me ... not sure who is pro or antagonist ... but my sense of a negative force is there with strength ... i like the work you do with small font and violet color ... makes me think of how God speaks to humans with a small voice .. but like i say .. the characters are confused in me nog
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[Corset]

Thank you , three "voices" indicated by color if that helps

[Einstein Noodle]

yes .. that helps to know