Beautiful reflection

Beautiful reflection

Wanaka,

beautiful reflections

A white horsed cloud

dreams

dustbowl buffalo

feathered and bare

howls of a distant flute

wolf on cliffs of bravery

mountain faces

a Giant's Causeway

but too critical

and we set it upon you

his electric chair

to sir with love

uncomfortable heavy

should we define government

around your sphere

Wanaka

moon's light in soul reflection

in winter's white and pine berry blue

Cardinal red winged winter robes

die down to brown, black eyed

with your cornflower lashes

inside is;

a silhouette dancing

on the light of your eye

Wanaka

black eye gleaming 

dilated ebony 

a burst of sun

oh organdy sky: a

beautiful reflection.

Reviews

[Judy Emery/ Lilly Emery]

very beautiful poem I really liked how you put it all together.

[Corset]

Thank you Lilly, for reading, commenting and friend request! :D

[RW Erskine]

well done Corset,
beautiful tapestry

[Corset]

Thank you , I'm glad you thought so.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing words and thoughts. Your words gentle, kind and worthwhile. I had to read again dear friend. Thank you Corset for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Corset]

Thank you so much Coyote, one of these days I may be tempted to collect that reward, lol, but being that you are so sweet to me I won't tell the posse where you guys are..jk.. I love that photo!

[Coyote Poetry]

You made your point gentle and with reasons. You are welcome dear Corset.

[wordman]

you painted some lovely images with your words,,texas style

[Corset]

hey thanks wordman, nice to see you XD

[wordman]

you`re welcome,always nice to see you

[Corset]

Thank you !

[Jon Roggie]

I will be honest. I feel the emotion. There is a story I want to follow.. In the moment, I feel pain.

[Corset]

you are so intuitive, there is a story behind this one and it is tragic.

[Jon Roggie]

The comment dustbowl buffalo dragged me in.
Mother was born in Oklahoma.
Raised in California.
Picked cotton as a child.
Trying to grasp the underlying story.
Mixing with my own memories.

[Corset]

you sound as if you've lead a colorful life XD

[Jon Roggie]

You could say that. Met Frank Sinatra's mom. Dad delivered milk to him, and her each week. Walked around in West and East Berlin. Managed to write with great personalities.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i journeyed through the imagery of this---a day's worth, a night's worth...a poem's worth...
exquisite...
j.

[Corset]

A wide smile for your review J. thank you!! XD

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

"Wanaka" melodic Maori name...the lake "moon's light in soul's reflection" mysterious, prismatic, mirror..Lovely, lyrical, flowing poem, like the lake, with stellar imagery and metaphor- "a burst of sun..oh organdy sky"...Beautifully written.

[Corset]

Such a beautiful review, thank you Annette!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are very welcome. A pleasure to read!

[Nebula]

beauty and dream

a delicious poetry

[Corset]

Hello Nebula, great moniker, Thank you for your comments.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Your poem brings out a world beauty that mesmerizes the mind with images of farmland and desert sands.

[Corset]

Hey you, thank you !