Van Gogh

Van Gogh

A Poem by Corset






...and you shall not be 
as the maids of dairy,
leg dangled haystack .

© 2016 Corset


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Corset, ever hear "Sunshine" by The Archie's. Music by the great Jeff Barry, lyrics by Bobby Bloom. The same duo wrote "Montego Bay" about 1974.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nP8SF0-9Wsc

Posted 6 Years Ago


Corset

6 Years Ago

Hi Ohiojohn, no I don't remember that one but I do remember the cartoons, wow that is a blast from t.. read more
Simple and straight to the point, while remaining ambiguous. Love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Corset

6 Years Ago

Thank you Emanuel V!
Gorgeous, she unique and more than the sum of our works. Regards Ray xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes it amazes me how so much can be conveyed with just a few well chosen words. This says a lot. Very creative, combining the painting with the words. Nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beauty, in uniqueness, every woman is her own, and not measured by what she does, or against other women. I like the way you blended the painting, the painter, and the poem into one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mother Earth... Mother Sun... without them, life would stop. QED: our uses are more than breath.

Your few words say more than most tomes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Corset

8 Years Ago

Thank you Emma, funny, I always considered the sun to be male all fiery and volatile beating down on.. read more
emmajoy

8 Years Ago

Ah, but Mister Moon shoves the missus into the warmth of the world... I often juggle the held norm .. read more
Corset

8 Years Ago

That he does...i'm all for that, let it all hang out :)
The value of a woman goes well beyond the work she does.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Corset

8 Years Ago

a beautiful review thank you R&R, I agree!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

8 Years Ago

A beautiful review for a beautiful poem written by a beautiful lady.
Corset

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
i love the mood of this...you will be counted, not taken for granted...each woman is special...not just one in a herd of many---not just one needle in a haystack...
i love the metaphor...i am inclined to feel so at home on farms...always, since i was a little kid.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Corset

8 Years Ago

i loved this review Jacob :) thank you

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Corset

San Antonio, TX



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