Moon at Daybreak

The wonderful Artwork /painting is by Vladimir Kush

                                   

 Close my mind and feel the eyes
 Close my eyes and I feel the mind
 Omni present and pressing hard
 Eyelids fighting the trumpet of dawn
 Soul harp in strumming hands
 Your profile a meandering landscape
  Where I am Is lost
against the light of the horizon.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

my cup of tea as they say ;) deeply meditative, reflective and romantic ..such a short little poem with very much to offer ..enjoyed reading
E.

[Jack...]

Superbly enchanting. One of my favorite morning visions, a bright moon sharing the sky with a rose petal sunrise, though I realize your poem is about so much more than just the view, this is where it brought my mind. As for your words, simply beautiful, the feel, so smooth and peaceful. This was wonderful.

[Corset]

Hi Jack! (get hijack ooooh) Thank you so much for reading, ohhh I remember you! From Rene! You are an awesome poet! I'll be by , like... right now!

[h d e rushin]

I spent all afternoon reading the bible. I mean, why not? I mean some things happen in the bible
that are down right supersonic. Great floods, damnation, destruction, redemption, healing, reason,
the excellence of power. POWER. I think I left out something ,but darn near everything.

kinda like these last few poems from you dear friend.
Where everything good and all things supernatural happens..


dana

[Corset]

lol, well, in these days and times, it certainly couldn't hurt, but remember Dana, that was written by men who wanted something to control a mass and a testimony, so while giving testimony man sometimes likes to embellish, such as a definition of an abomination, they would have had no qualms about throwing in some personal opinions being well meaning humans after all, all men and women are created by and equal....IMHO, God is deity, perfection, incapable of making mistakes, every creature is made and a mate made for it. Just promise if you are going to read the bible ..well , just remember what I said K? hugs to you.

[Ed Hart]

daymend, daysong, day-today, it'a a day kind of day, and you are worth your weight in soul

[Corset]

Thank you so much Ed.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Every time I read this I get a new meaning in my head..a new vision. your, I AM may be lost but your dreamscapes are ever so present. I feel the flutter of your eyelids the twitch of your brow and totally understand why day comes too early :)

[Corset]

Thank you Red

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

my necklace always does the same thing
I'm trying to think of a useful review for this
can I just say it's awesome?
I'm mostly just really drowsy a.t.m.
I may give it a go later

[Corset]

Rock on.......

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

I decided not to rock tonight, I was afraid of hurricanes

[Corset]

bah, that is always a danger, but i bet you'd lasso it and ride it into next week

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

I wish I had your confidence in me, ha

[Corset]

"Omni present and pressing hard"
Such a meditation luv.... great.

To be with the one you love, profoundly here,
I enjoyed this, immensely.

- Elisa

[Corset]

Thank you Ellie.

My pleasure sweetie, and soon come by for more! xoxo