Time Machine

I need a time machine to take me back
back before over sensitivity
       before tears and disbelief
          
so I could think before I act or speak
for the good of all,
    if good means I live without you
          I wanna be bad...
               I wanna be real real bad
                      just like the way I miss you.
      

Reviews

[Tree]

Nothing is more attractive than a person who is willing to sacrifice for the shot at her/his love; that persistence. That strength. Now, don't get we wrong, persistence can quickly take a turn for the worse but proving ones loyalty, even if it means to temporarily dishonor ones self? can be sexy. And this came through to me in this piece, well done, C.

[Corset]

lol, you are beautiful Diego, anytime you wish to be stalked please feel free to come to my page and I will help you :) unfortunately all stalking stays inside this room where it's optional. :)

[Tree]

:)

[iliOZ]

i often wonder what happens to our thoughts and feelings when we die
where do they go?
do we predestine them during our conscientious stage?
do we really have this power?

love how you verbulate (if that is a word)

[Corset]

lol, if it isn't a word I think it should be! you almost make me cry with that , it's an inside joke thing, don't worry, but yeah, should be a word but I don't think it was until now! You made a new word! You rock, it's a great word too, and a great review, I'd have to say that they are recorded and catagoried as any science discovery would be, i imagine feelings like snowflakes are similar but felt differently each time by each person to certain degrees, so that would probably be note worthy to some test student in the big ever nether. :P my best guess :)

[Wondering Mind]

only problem is, time has no mechanism as such...
all that remains will be memory, in time

[Corset]

:( I know, I don't wany to be a memory but I don't have much of a choice in that,
so thanks WM for reminding me! lol, jk, yeah that sucks but that's one of life ironies i guess.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

genuine pangs of partition

[Corset]

true dat darlin'

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

torn apart and needs more than glue to make the whole you

[Sami Khalil]

A very heartfelt and powerful sentiments upon the wings of time's nostalgia...A great write...:)

[Corset]

Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[captain]

wow, this takes me back to something good on my life, but sadly we can only hope for the better. For we can never turn the hands of time for karma will repeat the same mistake over and over again like running in a loop. Awesome!

[Corset]

hmm possibly but if we do things differently then...perhaps the cycle will be broken?

[Corset]

Thank you for your insights and comments :)

[captain]

yes perhaps it will, :) it's a pleasure to read your verses :)

[shivohumsohum]

I am time!

you invented the machine..and its about time that you drive in to say hello to me and briefly have some glacier-ice tea and goodbye quickly you bid me

be refreshed and new after finding the real you

[Corset]

Hi Time :) thanks for stopping in

[shivohumsohum]

I did and welcome

[Baby Ricochet]

If I went back I'd probably do the same things again

[Corset]

unfortunately baby, I probably would too :(