Time in Thistle Downs

Happy Valentines to all those lonely hearts out there today. There are no clocks in heaven.

You could peel the red thistles 

from my eyes like the fibrous

outer skin of a forbidden fruit.

The sky would be silken silvery blue

should I splay my fingers to the moon

awaiting a cyber link up.

My touch- would turn you to bone dreams 

charcoal abundant diamond studded 1.2 light

years away from the maw of the blackest halo

There- would be no time for goodbyes

on the other side of a black hole

There- is no time at all, time would not

exist where we are, unlike the carousal

thud of my heart,

There are no clocks in Heaven.

Heaven does not tick.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Corset]

Honey,

I think your words are a tribute to the deceased.
and anyone who we miss on days like these...
I'm not much valentine's fan you know that, but if you
come with something powerful like this, I get tears in my eyes ...
Can my big brother join? in the world from up there? with yours?
Also hope that he will find your sis and Frieda's...
Most excellent and heartwarming write dear Corset
Touched me to the bones too~

XXX

[Corset]

absolutely sweet Ellie, they will all join and have a party, they will have to hose the place down afterwards :) they will have so much fun thinking about the days they were here and sending love back at us :)

That makes my heart smile.... He was with me yesterday also very strongly... your write maked me tranquillo love, and your words after too! sweet soul, and woman xxx

*made lol, I go talk NetherEnglish...

[Corset]

I'm so glad xx imho your heart should always be smiling!

Yours too dear :) no matter what... and you know how proud I am of you! hence to that thingy ;-)

[Corset]

awwh thank you I'm proud of me too , still no smoking.

Very good dear :D "see it as a new life changing thing forever" once you do, no need anymore... (so my friends told me).... *hugs*

[Frieda P]

I felt this in my bones....

There are no clocks in Heaven.
Heaven does not tick.

Made me think of my sister whilst I'm bitching and moaning, she's out there somewhere, who the feck knows where...good smack upside the head Corset.

Love the first stanza....

'should I splay my fingers to the moon'

Great line....love it all! Except for the slap!

[Corset]

sorry sweets, I have a sister of my own out there, hopeful they'll find each other and say hi for us.

[Frieda P]

:( I didn't know...so sorry *sigh*

[Corset]

it's ok. yeah, it bites huh :(

[Sami Khalil]

My touch- would turn you to bone dreams

charcoal abundant diamond studded 1.2 light

years away from the maw of the blackest halo...
Wow. Dear poetess . You are taking us on journeys light years away with your magical powers...
Keep up the great work...:)

[Corset]

Thanks Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)