How could you...?

How could you...?

A Poem by Corrupted Rose

Fists slamming into the wall
Taking a breath...
Turning to look at you
Tell me it isn't true...
Oh, but how it is
Reality couldn't have hit any harder
My love for you was real
Why was it different for you?
I hate you for doing this to me
My eyes can never find love in a man like you again...
I hoped those texts were a misunderstanding
I wished the lies that you told were reasonable
It really was what I thought in the end
Table throwing...
How could you?!
Forgive me for wishing for you to take your final breath
But, when I leave this place of heartache...
I'm the one who is going to die within

© 2014 Corrupted Rose


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I can feel the anguish and hurt while reading this. Very beautifully written. Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Like the other two, I've never had the experience but I can imagine how it'd make one feel like throwing tables. Being lied to, being cheated on... Those are some of the most hurtful things that can be done to a person and you conveyed that really well in this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Corrupted Rose

9 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
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Gee
Never happened to me,thank God,but like the other reviewer has said it seems a common occurrence.I think the saying "familiarity breeds contempt" is so true.Anyway,enjoyed your poem and you're to young to be tied down,wait until you reach 30's.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Corrupted Rose

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the feedback. You're right. I am too young to be tied down, but heartbreak seems to be.. read more
Gee

9 Years Ago

I'm afraid that's life at times,you just have to get even more out of the good times.Take care
Corrupted Rose

9 Years Ago

Very true. :)
I've seen the story written a thousand times here. It is a shame that some people don't realize what they have. Some growing up must first occur for most of them.

I also find it strange that such pretty girls write things like this, but I guess it happens to everyone at one time or another.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Corrupted Rose

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, Tim. It's true... It happens to everyone at one point in time. Pretty girl.. read more
Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Oh, I can appreciate your point of view for sure. Sometimes the chase is better than the catch in th.. read more
Corrupted Rose

9 Years Ago

Yes that is what I believe also.

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Corrupted Rose
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My name is Angela. I am eighteen years old. I have only had one of my writings published in a book so far, but in the future I do plan for that to change. About my writings... I write about anything.... more..

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