Love Blinds All

He was treacherous...

My love was given to him with no strings attached

Anything I would have done for this man

The man who broke my heart...

Everything chokes me up sometimes

How can I love so purely, so openly and yet it means nothing

He looked at me in the end as a piece of meat...

Never would I have seen this coming

An ever after is what I was looking for...

A one stand whenever was pleasant for him is what he sought

So twisted he was, but so easily I was fooled

Who is really at fault here?

All the signs were there looking back on it

In the end I finally realize...

Love does blind all

Reviews

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Very well written. You have done well in that I can feel the confusion and self-loathing in this piece. This is so true. Sometimes we have to wonder if it was all our fault. If it was us who weren't good enough. But we also have to try and get in the minds of such betrayers and try to see what the f**k is going on in there. Sometimes I really can't understand how people can use, abuse and refuse so heartlessly. My favourite line is, " All signs were there looking back on it." Again, very beautifully done..

[Corrupted Rose]

Thank you so much. Your post meant a lot to me.

[Justin]

wow that was really powerful!!!! love is one of those things that can be written about in many forms :) :) great job :)

[Daydreamer]

How can I love so purely, so openly and yet it means nothing
So twisted he was, but so easily I was fooled

Who is really at fault here?

All the signs were there looking back on it

In the end I finally realize...

Love does blind all

These lines were my favourite!
I liked how it never turned into
a lengthy, broken-tuned kind of
remembrance! But rather, a
sentimental recall!💗💗💗

[Corrupted Rose]

Aw, I appreciate it! Thanks a bunch.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true.
"In the end I finally realize...
Love does blind all"
Love make us accept things we do not need. I like the realistic feel and emotion in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Corrupted Rose]

Thank you again. I'm happy you are understanding what I write. That's all a writer ever asks for.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did. You write with heart and soul. The best writers do.

[Corrupted Rose]

Aw, thank you once again. I truly appreciate your words. :)

[DoormanDan]

This is a great little poem. Its unfortunate that there are monsters who will use people who would give their own lives for them. You are most definately a good writer!

[Corrupted Rose]

Aw, thank you so much!

[DoormanDan]

You are very welcome!