Sinking.

Loneliness...
It drowns my heart.
I've pretended to be okay for so long
But when reality hits and I look myself in the mirror...
I see every broken piece...
My pain - my scars are everywhere.
How could I ever be okay?
Everyone walks away
They leave me sinking...
Further and further down
I can almost feel the flames of hell.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good description of the road to hell and bad thoughts. Loneliness is a bad dead-end. We must decide to leave the bad place and come back alive. I liked the poem. Made me think and ponder things this morning. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Corrupted Rose]

Thanks again for all the reviews! I enjoy reading what someone has to think about my writings.

[Coyote Poetry]

Please send me read request. I will read. I like your style and thoughts.

[Corrupted Rose]

Will do. Thank you. :)