Hell isn't too far away

That night I was destined to die
Lying there shivering...
Freezing by my own cold heart
I let go of the one person who could have saved me
It seems as if hell isn't too far away...
Especially within my heart
Hatred doesn't cover the anger I feel
I don't understand...
How did I let myself get here?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told the truth. Easy to find hell. Hard to find heaven. I like the honest tone to the description. I do like the poetry that leave the reader with questions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nikita Gorlach]

Beautiful. Dark. Romantic.

"Freezing by my own cold heart"

The depth of just that one line is astounding.

[Corrupted Rose]

Thank you. :)

[Steve87]

I hear the pain in your words.
they wash over me and remind me
I am not alone in this world at least. even in my darkest moments

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

Nice, it's great how you have the reader pondering one of there own depressing moments, at least it did me. I can ABSOLUTELY relate. NEVER GIVE UP, and NEVER LOOSE HOPE. Thanks for sharing

[wordman]

choices,we all make choices that we have to live with