Angel............M.K.

I was pissed about losing all of my poems. I was off of here for a year it seems...lol ne way, I feel this one should be read

The world cried

such a sad surprise

when an angel had to leave

I look up to the skies

see your smilin eyes

your laughter dancin with the breeze

so fly high my angel eyes

this world can no longer clip your wings

Reviews

[serenae_dc]

Oh, I love this poem. The last line just hits. I like poems like this. There's so much meaning to it. Just a suggestion: I think it's better if you didn't omit the 'g' in the '-ing' words. Other than that, I love it so much!

[Sonad]

Hey, That was nice :))

[Aspiring Angel]

I really liked this write I found by just dropping in here and there this morning. It leaves a sense of sadness at an unexpected loss but yet it leaves you also with a joy that this angel is now above this world and flying high. I especially liked your last line.

Blessings
Lesa

[apple]

lol , it means "thumbs up" :P i like your poem ^.^

[apple]

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