Online

Online

A Poem by Tania Mo
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for online prick teasers

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Come rain or shine
Come rain or shine
I am gonna be online online online
No light no song
My night is so so long
I am gonna be online
For the Green Card I am in line
Give it to me O Daddy O
Let my kismet shine shine shine
Give it to me come rain or shine
Dear Daddy I am online
My earth quakes below my shoe
But I'm still here for you
You made me flower in your shower
Now take my flower with your ol' masculine power
Oh so fine o fine so fine
Come rain or shine
Come rain or shine
I am gonna be online online online
Come to me my Daddy
Its mailing time mailing time
Come rain or shine
Come rain or shine
For you O Daddy O
For your green green card oh so fine
I'm still online online online

© 2023 Tania Mo


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A catchy tune with a warning label. People can be anything or anyone they choose online, always be aware of that.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tania Mo

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
A song so beautiful. Enjoyed reading 🙂

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania Mo

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
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This read like a song to me; full of pop lyrical sound and rhymes but obviously one with a careful warning attached. Given the words and your status line for the poem, I'll be on my guard for any teasers about. I think I might have already met one, though!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania Mo

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
I really liked your song Tania. Its very peppy and full of energy. You have such a way with words and rhtym even without rhyming.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania Mo

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
I clearly, get a message here, but yet its a fun poem keep up the writing it suits you

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania Mo

1 Year Ago

Oooh thank you. Just for fun writing with friends.
That was fun to read, very peppy and very happy

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania Mo

1 Year Ago

Aww thank you willweb
There. See it comes with a bit of practice. You just gotto get the hang of it. Try with simple rhymes first. Use the link I shared. Pm me if you need more help. This is a fine effort. Good going Mo.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tania Mo

1 Year Ago

Ooo thank Aj. I owe you a treat lol.
Oh geez this reads like a pop song. Oh so fine Oh so fine my susu is out of line. Happens with old peckers as you say here. Funny man.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tania Mo

1 Year Ago

Gee thank u

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Added on February 6, 2023
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Tania Mo
Tania Mo

Sydney , Epping , Australia



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