You can't tell me

You can't tell me what to do so don't try to!

You just stand there and point your silly little finger!

Trying to tell me what I can and can not do. 

You tell me I am wrong and you are right. 

Things are messed up in your brain you think your always right. 

Your times gonna come when you learn you have no right

To tell me what to do.

Tonight could be the night.

Author's Note

Girls who tell you what to do,.

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

A very youthful poem, short and to the point. Not too creative, but it gets the message across. Good writing!

[PokemonFan#1]

I liked it!
It was well written!
Keep it up!
=^_^=

[~Death Is The Key~]

I really like it, I'd have to say that it makes a lot of sense to me mainly because i've dealt with a few people that your describing in that poem :) keep up the good work

[RJM]

I hate people like that. Straight to the point and short without mincing words. Good.

[Kayla :)]

ha. loved it. It was really good and so true.

[Becky Clancy]

Not to be rude, Courtnee, but this didn't make alot of sense to me, but it could be the fact that I'm a blonde :P But I still like it nonetheless (:

[A.Taylor]

I've definitely been there. Relationships like that are completely toxic. It took me two years to recover from a controlling, emotionally/mentally abusive relationship and the relationship only lasted 8 months.
Very emotionally driven piece. Hopefully you take your own advice.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Powerfully wonderful work :D

[SilentDreamer]

Courtnee, when I read this I hear your voice in my head...Creepy.:)