Changing Outlook

Changing Outlook

A Poem by Corbin Driver

Everyday I hope for the best.
Hoping for something better with every passing day.

Being a pessimist though I often give up after trying one time.
I give up trying to learn or do something new.
I tell myself I will never succeed at this.

Often I put myself to shame, 
usually because of my pessimistic nature.

A light shines bright for me though.
It lights my path showing me different roads to take.
The light guides me towards greatness and happiness.

Sometimes I am reluctant to take the paths, 
thinking there is nothing for me at the end.
I walk it anyway.

When I reach the end of the path,
I notice that things brightened up for me.
That I have reached something that really makes me smile.

Another light beckons me to go on, 
to continue the paths.

After I reach my destination, I know I am not done.
I still have bright paths ahead of me,
all ready to be walked.

On these paths,
I know I am not alone.
A great, caring, loving voice guides me on my way.
It tells me to keep walking the paths.

I realize from walking these paths, 
that each destination I reach gets better and better.
My spirit rises higher with each new destination.

I have noticed that my outlook on things got better.
I feel happiness and joy.
I eventually see that if I stay on these paths,
things will only get better.

This is a great sign for me.
I shows that my future is bright!

© 2016 Corbin Driver


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Strong, honest and powerful words.
"I know I am not alone.
A great, caring, loving voice guides me on my way.
It tells me to keep walking the paths."
We need to find peace and understanding. The poem took reader to places of decision and I liked the hopeful ending. Good to know. We are never alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Corbin Driver

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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To the point, honest, and hopeful. I liked this!! Sugoi

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The ending is surely filled with hope... a thing I wasn't sure would happen when I started reading it.
Good write ! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corbin Driver

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Very free-form, loose poetry. Lovely words and thoughts--we should all experience them from time to time.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corbin Driver

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Lovely poem!!
Keep up the great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corbin Driver

8 Years Ago

Thank you Emily!
Strong, honest and powerful words.
"I know I am not alone.
A great, caring, loving voice guides me on my way.
It tells me to keep walking the paths."
We need to find peace and understanding. The poem took reader to places of decision and I liked the hopeful ending. Good to know. We are never alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Corbin Driver

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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