I Shake My Head

I shake my head at the terrible doings of others.

Like, the killing and discrimination unto

other people.

I shake my head

at the fake sorrow some give;

pretending to care about another

ones feelings.

I shake my head

at the meaningless promises.

Promises that many say they will keep,

but throw away in the end.

I shake my head

at the useless fighting between people;

fights that never prove anything.

I shake my head

at the horrible place this world

is starting to become.

Author's Note

I'm open to any criticism.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"I shake my head
at the horrible place this world
is starting to become."
Every life had value. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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i agree with your message wholeheartedly Corbin. great poem by the way. keep it up man :)

[Corbin Driver]

Thank you Dante :)