She

She

A Poem by norafb
"

a glimpse of her day

"
She fixed her hair again. She looked in the mirror and saw everything she is not. 
She saw her uneven lips,her non-existing cheekbones

She saw her little pimple,her beauty mark,she saw dark circles under her eyes.

Deep sigh.

Looked again,then left bathroom and smiled along with the rest. 

There was a tear-y corner of her eye,just so subtle so no one ever notices.

And so,no one ever did.

© 2014 norafb


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norafb
I would really appreciate your review, add me as a friend,I'm really looking forward to reading your work. I hope you don't hate mine too :)

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A short but an impactful poem...

Posted 10 Years Ago


norafb

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it :)
A lovely little piece and one many can relate to. A few spelling / grammatical errors, but otherwise lovely. Simple and to the point; a bit of an 'inside look' almost, which is always an interesting find. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


norafb

10 Years Ago

Thank you ! I appreciate your review,yeah,grammar is not my best feature and I'm not a native speake.. read more
The Veiled Writer

10 Years Ago

You're absolutely welcome! And don't fret, they were small things. :) It was still written very well.. read more
Wow.I loved it. Honestly, Its written beautifully and alot of women can actually relate to it. Personally.. i think its a lovely poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


norafb

10 Years Ago

thank you so much. My main goal was to make it relatable :)

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Added on October 21, 2014
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Tags: she, fixing, beauty, innerbeauty

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