A River Of Tears

A River Of Tears

A Poem by Mary

The River of Sadness

a river of tears

carries me to madness

as it flows down the years

 

It widens my bank

and deepens my bed

these waters I drink

leave me thirsting and dead

© 2008 Mary


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Excellent rhyme-rhythm scheme! It all flows beautifully, and you can feel the emotions behind it. Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago
Your work reminds my of E.E. Cummings. Very structured rhymes. I am impressed

Posted 16 Years Ago


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 Added on August 9, 2008

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Mary
Mary

St.Petersburg, FL



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Much of my poetry is about addiction. It played a huge, if not the only, role for many years of my life. I'm now a recovering addict, clean for over a year. I'm also recovering from self-mutilation, w.. more..

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