Wish upon

a sad poem about wishing not to lose a part of me.

Starry night moon Delure reverse the numbers on my life,

Bring back what I once was,

Dearly happy smiles and all,

Inspired with silks of colors all the more.

Needing the girl who dreamed of the stars,

Wishing upon what once was mine.

Long gone behind the veil,

Realism strikes me into an empty shell.

I wish upon,

I wish upon,

I wish upon,

Please dearly, don't leave me.

Author's Note

Hi guys sorry for not posting here for a long time lots has happened. But came up with a poem for so long I felt like I lost my creativity. So here's a poem of how I feel I lost a part of me. And don't forget to comment thank you.<3

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

very emotive ... wishing for what one thinks has been lost ... something precious and innocent ... the pastels are like eye candy ;) and the change to black along with the repetition: "I wish upon" is killer for me ... its heart wrenching ... so well done says i!
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[Pink Pastel]

Thank you so much💓💞

[Karmee]

Such a wonderful write, I enjoyed this, I think we all have been there a time or two.

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you😃👍👍👍

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very nice poem. I relate sometimes to this poem. Feeling like a piece is gone. Love it. Great poem :)

[Pink Pastel]

Awwwe thank you

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

You're welcome :)

[Jes' Pi]

Very Nice Words, Very Nice Poem.

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you

[Lord of mad men]

I have gone through losing parts of me more then i would ever care to admit but i hold onto the pieces that still remain no matter how dark,twisted and broken they may be fort that is all i have to hold onto. It takes time and reason for the spark to grow and light a fire that burns bright. Keep being you and you will do great things! Yours Truly A Mad Lord

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you this helps a lot

[Lord of mad men]

If you ever need someone to talk to i am just a message away...

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks really^-^

[Lord of mad men]

It's my pleasure

[Alessander]

Please dearly, don't leave me

Poignant last line.

Think we have all felt like this at our downest times.

[Pink Pastel]

very very true