Tears Of Gem

beautiful drops we show cutely dearly.

Tears glim of darkness,

Caged up,

Locked up,

Held up,

Hated stuff.

One two three drop

One two three drop

Escalated Gem,

Just rise to be gone.

Author's Note

SADLDY WAITING!:(
FOR DREAMS TO BE REAL.....

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

that's raw.
well, i can understand how badly it really sucks to be awaiting for something that we long to get pleased with by now. very smooth. whispery. & captivating poetry you come up with. It's not sad but quite poignant. you stuffed it quite well with the wand of your thoughts. great job!

[Pink Pastel]

Oh thank you*-*

[Lord of mad men]

Is is very nice. It speaks greatly to me. Thank you for sharing. This is a wonderful piece.

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you for sharing^-^

[sinNsincerity]

Let them drop; it cleanses the soul.

[Pink Pastel]

It does but your still stuck with the same sad feelings.

[sinNsincerity]

And that will never go away. There are times when I smell a scent that reminds me of a past lover that just takes me back in her arms and that saddens me because we are no longer together. I think on the good times we had, but it helps even more to not think of her at all. But the sadness never goes away...

[Pink Pastel]

That is true your really skilled with words-----:")

[sinNsincerity]

Us guys are a******s and most of the time f**k everything up. Just keep your heart open no matter what.

[hi]

i like it, it really sad tho

and yes it would be nice dreams were real

[Pink Pastel]

True why can't some dreams just be truly real why!!!!!!!!!!!:*(

[hi]

i was told it is because they are called dreams

[Pink Pastel]

Yes I know but we can still have hope.even though I know hope does not exist anymore in the world but still I hold and cherish my kindness^-^

[hi]

well i think hope is still in the world if not then no one would even read a poem,
for they hope to come on here to read and clearly there is people so it must be still hope in the world and nothing wrong with kindness

[Pink Pastel]

Hope there are people out there that still cherish all the good things.sorry it just for eight years I been in a place of darkness in my family and I accept there are people who are in deep worse than me but it's hard to trust sometimes.and everyone I know is sad,hating on someone or in depression and I think what has the world come to really.

[hi]

i dont blame you for not trusting lots of people are vary bad
there is people out therethat still cherish hope but i do think they are becoming less,

and sorry to hear you too have been threw darkness but the world is full of darkness
but unless any that follow light refuse to shine then there well always be hope,

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you that's very inspiring^-^

[GalaxyGhost]

One thing I love about the poem is the colors. It is so opposite of the message or words of the poem.

[Pink Pastel]

So it's good?'-'