Tears Of Gem

beautiful drops we show cutely dearly.

Tears glim of darkness,

Caged up,

Locked up,

Held up,

Hated stuff.

One two three drop

One two three drop

Escalated Gem,

Just rise to be gone.

Author's Note

SADLDY WAITING!:(
FOR DREAMS TO BE REAL.....

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

that's raw.
well, i can understand how badly it really sucks to be awaiting for something that we long to get pleased with by now. very smooth. whispery. & captivating poetry you come up with. It's not sad but quite poignant. you stuffed it quite well with the wand of your thoughts. great job!

[Pink Pastel]

Oh thank you*-*

[Serendipity Planet]

I adore short poetry so much

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you i love it too appreciate yoyr review 👍😃👍👍👍🌸

[Mr. Lopez]

A woman of few words but well spoken. I liked your title too because it's true. Each teardrop is rich with pain or joy and often times taken for granted by the person those tears were shed for. Making those drops even more valuable.

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you I needed that♡♡♡

[MAC]

though sad tis a well written short piece. few words but it gets to your heart quickly.

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks♡♡♡♡♡

[Gray]

The twinkle of a tear begets sadness in so many ways. Some cleanse the soul, others arrive on schedule. May your tears dry.

[Pink Pastel]

Awwe thanks that would be nice.

[Howling_Wolf]

A very short, but well written poem. You were able to capture tears in a beautifully written way. How did you do the coloring?

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks when you write the font and color you can change

[Ayushi Beura]

Short but effective...describes the whole depth of the emotion.I loved your poem!!! :D

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you
never pictured it would be this likeable^-^

[iamshadowine]

I love the way you've used the colors here! an excellent write up!
keep writing :D

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you yea the colors^-^

[Poopewpachoo]

This felt almost like a song you sing to yourself when you've reached that point in life where you think, "When will it be my turn?"
Very nicely written.

[Pink Pastel]

Very true cool I sang the poem and it kinda sounds like a beautiful doll signing it*-*♡

[Poopewpachoo]

Told you it felt like a song ^_^ You wrote it in a very cool fashion. Nice job.

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks I sing from time to time I never did thought that I could write songs let alone be a good singer it kinda helps with stress.I did make up songs but they were stupid and weird hahaah.

[Poopewpachoo]

Hey, songs are just another form of poetry, so don't be afraid to write some!

[Pink Pastel]

Never am hahahahah okay fine I will post a song I made when I was eight and eleven it might sound childish though lol.

[Poopewpachoo]

Looking forward to it ^_^

[Pink Pastel]

Okay deal^-^thanks for being you♡♡♡♡♡

[Poopewpachoo]

That's what I'm here for

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you♡♡♡♡♡♡really.

[Poopewpachoo]

No problem at all!

[Surabhi Kaushik]

I am waiting for my dreams to be real too. Very beautiful description of tears. Short and real. Good job.

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks_______were all humans who wish for more in hope.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very beautiful and sad. Waiting feels like eternity. I know the feeling. Love this poem :)

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you and yea i know the feeling too^-^

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome :)