Stuck Goth

A random poem I made in college bored^-^

Iced in light,

Glimmering shadows,

Rock hard,

Die hard,

All night in my Starter.

The package delight,

Of fear with no reason,

To hop Alice away,

It's a way better way to listen

Author's Note

It's Random But I hope you like it<3

Reviews

[Willow Wild]

I just absolutely love the randomness in this poem! You had me interested just by reading the title!

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you so much to be honest its been a long time now since I dont write anymore poems sadly.

[Willow Wild]

Aww! Too bad because you’re fantastic at it!

[Pink Pastel]

thanks I can again but need inspiration ha ha

[iamshadowine]

I really love the title! It forced me to read this poem of yours which was great indeed!
keep writing :D

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you so much I appreciate this a lot^-^

[E.Jay]

Poetry doesnt need to make any sense at all. That is the beauty of it. Just put down whats in your head, and its art. I loved the randomness of this piece. Really great job, I enjoy reading your work.

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks girl this really made my night^-^♡

[E.Jay]

You're very welcome!

[Wolf_Lord]

Randomness is the spice of life... Good job.
Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you^-^

[hi]

i agree it is random but only the last part kinda threw me off, i like how it flow

[Pink Pastel]

thanks(^-^)

[Lord of mad men]

i like reading this! it reminds me of well how i use to be and how i am when i am alone with my thoughts. great read!

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks I am glad people can relate^-^

[sinNsincerity]

"Who are you? I'm Alice."

[W&oslash;lfy]

Alice in Wonderland.

[sinNsincerity]

I love Alice.

[W&oslash;lfy]

Who does not love Alice? Besides Alice haters.

[sinNsincerity]

Beats me. Have you read Alice's Adventures in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll?

[W&oslash;lfy]

Actually no. I have seen all the movies that they have made. I hate reading.

[sinNsincerity]

I love the movies as well; especially the new one- Through the looking glass.
I hate reading also, but love masterpieces...

[W&oslash;lfy]

True that.

[sinNsincerity]

That true hehe.

[Pink Pastel]

Lol I love how people can read something and imagine all different thanks^-^

[Alice Poésy]

Poetry doesn't always have to make sense. Sometimes it's just some seemingly random words strung together that just flow so smoothly who even cares about sense? This is exactly that. Such an odd piece, I love it :)

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you and that is true^-^

[GalaxyGhost]

I love this poem and it's simply the random craziness I like most.

[Pink Pastel]

lol I am glad you do

[GalaxyGhost]

Yeah, you're welcome !

[Howling_Wolf]

Its lovely; I'm going to guess a spoken word poem. I'm not the biggest expert at poetry.

[Pink Pastel]

Me neither but it happens