Saved in Time

Xenadi gets attacked and saved only to see her father dead.

Xenadi Akumi Chen was walking  down an alley when she felt as though she was being followed. When she turned around there was no one there. She turned back around and kept walking, but when she kept walking she came up in a corner and a guy jumped out of the nowhere and was wearing a mask. She couldn't quite tell who he was but he carried a knife with him and tried to attack her with it. Xenadi was scared and didn't  know what to do. The guy that was masked came closer to her and cut through her bag she held in her hands. "Where's the box?" he asked. "I don't know what you're talking about," Xenadi said. The guy thought she was lying and scratched her with the knife. "I ain't going to say it again, where is it?" he asked. "I don't know!" she screamed. Before he could've cut her again he pressed the knife to her neck but, something extremely cool happened someone attacked the masked man from behind, and he dropped the knife.

The person looked like a chick but she was too fast that she looked like a blur. The guy got scared and escaped before she could catch up to him. The girl with long red hair helped her up. Xenadi stared at her, I'm Misuki, the girl told her. Before she could tell her about the Acamedy, Misuki grabbed her arm and told her to go with her. But Xenadi let go and told her that she wasn't going anywhere she needed to see if her father was alright. But Misuki did not listen and pulled her with her. "Hey didn't you listen I said I need to go see my father!" Xenadi screamed. Xenadi then stood quiet and left but Misuki followed. When Xenadi got to her house her father was laying on the floor bleeding and Xenadi ran over to him. And next to him laid a threatening note. Misuki saw and knew right then what was best for her is Shauyan Acamedy.  

Author's Note

Thank you My Co-Author Tai Marie and this was made a long time ago but I guess sharing it won't be bad.

Reviews

[Wølfy]

Not to bad. A lot of grammar mistakes. Format is a bit of an eye sore.

[Pink Pastel]

Okay_______

[Wølfy]

Sorry. I do not sugar coat my reviews. I tell it how it is. Like Simon Cowell. xD

[Pink Pastel]

Lol! Simon Cowell no it's okay honesty is the right thing to do:)

[Wølfy]

Yeah. I believe so. :) That why I like him. He tells the truth. "No it was horrible, do not ever sing again. Good-bye."

[Pink Pastel]

I don't like him but okay.............

[Cas]

ooh, i like it! continue this!

[Pink Pastel]

Of course girl thank you--------^-^

[DRAGO]

no, it is good, it just needs some improvement

[DRAGO]

hmm___________- nice______

[Pink Pastel]

Is it really bad?*-*

[Pink Pastel]

Okay and thank you:)

[hi]

ok i like it but it needs more details,like the fight scene was will nit much of a fight scene,
i mean you never showed that she was scared or when she saw her dad dead she showed no emotion,
like no tears or anything,i like the plot but to me for this to be a real story i would like to see alot more
images placed in,

but i would love to see this story in a good rough draft and finish project
good write and keep writing

[Pink Pastel]

Okay true since it was a long time is a little hmm but it will get better and thank you^-^