Broken Pieces

Okay so when I wrote this I was really sad I lost two best friends for just being a friend. They tossed me aside like if I was trash but that was a long time ago. Only one came back and said sorry.

Things that pull you down into the night sky. 
Are worse things than what I thought of. 
Bad things passing, dragging and pulling you in until your broken into little pieces. 
One thing turns into more, 
Then what you thought is more than what it could be like. 
You think is heaven, 
But is actually jail, 
To the things broken inside me. 
Things taken away, 
Or things leaving you behind. 
Are bad memories that are never denied. 
For you can never run away. 
But just stay, 
To try to pick up the pieces. 
They left behind. 
Feeling dark in the joy you attached. 
Now is gone, 
And is in the deep, 
Into broken pieces. 
You thought you lost. 
My broken pieces will be lost forever. 

Author's Note

I hope you can relate to the pain I once had^-^

Reviews

[hi]

broken peaces.
i say everyone got them or at least a scar,this poem kinda tells the story of alot of people,
good write

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks I am sure once in a while everyones pieces fall to the ground at one point.It's good to help and relate thanks^-^

[Eric]

Feeling dark in the joy you attached.
Now is gone,
And is in the deep,

I love how you worded that section

[Pink Pastel]

Really! Lol i'm glad then^-^

[DRAGO]

This sounds sad, you are good at poems

[Pink Pastel]

Really cause I think I am really bad and these poems were made when I was small:)

[DRAGO]

Well, much better than alot of mine

[Pink Pastel]

Lol I bet not*-*

[DRAGO]

You say lol alot

[Pink Pastel]

Ha! Yea I love humor.