The Lady of Greys

This poem is my first poem ever, I wrote this when I was fifteen weirdly I had no issues with my stepmom she's the best actually. But this just came out of the top of my head so enjoy.

She takes my daddy, 
She takes my room, 
She takes my blanket too. 
She has generations of laughter. 
But am uptight and is her fault. 
Am losing my mind and am losing my patience. 
What can I do? 
I guess she's the boss of me too. 
This is crazy, I know it, but this is The Lady of Greys That keeps my soul like hers. 
Why is she bad, I know why? 
Cause she's the nightmares of my  dreams that keeps me awake at nights. 
The Lady of Greys keeps me in the dark alone and scared. 
But when I see love she's gone from my mind forever. 

Author's Note

I hope you like<3

Reviews

[WitchyWiccan)0(]

This gives me shivers. It's so dark and emotional. I like it.

[Pink Pastel]

thank you so much

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Wow, the creativity you had at such an early age with writing is amazing. Not many can do so like you and a couple others. Very beautiful but sad at the same time. Good job :)

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks but I don't really think I am good. I just share what feel I guess^-^

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

You are good and your welcome :)

[Pink Pastel]

Awwwe thanks now your giving me the feels:(^-^

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome :) :)

[iamshadowine]

excellent! i love the way you started this poem! :D
great work!

keep writing :D

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you for your kindness^-^

[M]

I like this :)
losing my mind and am losing my patience.. nicely phrased.

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks is my first poem ever

[M]

nice then :)

[hi]

i like it, it is kinda dark but i like the words you used

[Pink Pastel]

thanks, god bless^-^

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Short and sweet. Nice read. Generations of laughter....nicely phrased. Sorry not to understand, but who is the lady of greys?

[Pink Pastel]

I don't know really I wrote it
when I was fifteen. So maybe it was a darkness that I kinda felt close to me. And I kinda gave it a name.

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Ok. that's cool

[Angel of the devil]

i like it. its great! :)

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks♡

[Angel of the devil]

Welcome ;)

[Bluebird91]

Kind of confusing but cool

[Pink Pastel]

I know right lol^-^

[DRAGO]

This is well writen, but I don't really understand it

[Pink Pastel]

Lol, me neither it was really random.
I guess it was from a dream.