The land of the dead

The escape to the mortal world.

A crescent bright light shone upon three creepers trying to escape.

Before the light

"Come on, Zunami we can finally be free from Phara's in cagements and touring's,"said Clara.

"Look stupid, do you wanna be stuck here forever in tears,"said Laila.

"I don't know but you guys, I was born here in the land of the dead I am a succubus and I know nothing of the mortal world. For you is easy you guys before being a witch and a demon fox you were mortals and I don't know but I am scared and what if we get caught,"said Zunami like a terrified child.

"Laila stop your scaring her see she's trembling ,"said Clara holding onto scared and shaky Zunami.

"For crying out loud Zunami you're a nine hundred and four-year-old demon how can you be scared you have no shame,"said Laila harshly cold.

"Don't worry Zunami we will teach you okay,"said Clara smiling.

Zunami jumps onto Clara hugging her.

"Clara how are you a witch if you are so kind?"asked Zunami.

"Whatever are you coming or not?asked Laila Irritated.

"Yes all I ever had were you both,"said Laila.

The three creepers ran for it.

Then a light shone upon them, they been caught.

"No not today,"said Laila getting ready to fight.

"No guys I have this,"said Clara pushing the girls back to shield them.

"Muk da la vish!"screamed Clara with bold complete black eyes.

(Ca...Clash!)

"It's too powerful,"said Clara on the ground. 

"Damn Rackekons!"screamed Laila pissed ran to the leveled two hundred demon and attacked. Only to be pushed onto the ground too.

"Hey, pink flower do something...whispeared Laila touching Zunami's leg.

"But I am scared,"said Zunami shaking.

"If you don't do something than I and Clara will cease to exist!"screamed Laila.

"Ahhh!"screamed Zunami transforming into a huge plaranotix level nine hundred demon.

Attacking the Rackekon to death.

"Guys lets go,"said Zunami to Clara and Laila up in their faces.

Zunami noticed they were not responding they blacked out.

Zunami running grabbed Laila and Clara out right into the hole and into the real sunshine light away from the darkness.

"Yes, we made it guys!"screamed Zunami shaking Laila's body back and forth.

"Hey! I am not one of your dolls,"said Laila furiously.

"Yes it seems we are in a mortal forest,"said Clara getting up from the ground.

"Yes!,"screamed Zunami happy.

"But Zunami how did you do that?"asked Clara surprised of Zunami's level up.

"Oh, when you're a demon with a lot of age you can level up to a plaranotix demon,"said Zunami.

"cool very cool my girly girl,"said Clara petting Zunami's head.

"Ummm guys how the hell do we get out of this forest?"asked Laila confusedly mad.

"We can finally say goodbye to the land of the dead,"said Clara enjoying the moment.

"Yea,"said Zunami jumping up and down like a cute little rabbit.

"True,"agreed to Laila.

The three girls got lost. But in a moment of feeling free took over them. Now they gotta find a home.

Author's Note

I hope you like<3

Reviews

[DRAGO]

awesome. very entertaining

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks*-* I appreciate it Draygo.

[Pink Pastel]

Cool cool thanks although I know I still need a little more working on grammar I appreciate this^-^

[Dean Vaksman]

I'll be completely honest if it's okay.

The words are well used, and the story is interesting.

The grammar and punctuation need a little work though. There were a lot of missing commas and words to make fully comprehensible sentences.

Yet, i am sure that it is not edited, and judging by a glimpse at more of your works, you are a great writer.

Overall, i liked it very much! So please don't be discouraged by this!

You just need some editing =']

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you for your honesty ^-^

[SHAHNAWAZ NOOR MUHAMMAD]

This is fantastic. Your way of writing it is amazing I like it very well.

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks it just pop into my head lol