Gone

Just made up a title,not the best.

I see a light at the end of this dark tunnel.

And it's blinding me.

Do I keep going or stop?

I feel so disoriented,so confused.

I'm calling out for help,

Someone guide me,take my hand,

Someone help me,before it's to late.

Reviews

[Andie]

Oh wow. Short but strong. Personally I think it's about someone that just whent through some kind of horrific accident. Like maybe a car crash? And now that person is stuck in between heaven and earth, on the edge of death?

Anyways, I liked it a lot. Good work. :)

[CookieCrumbs]

Thanks!(: