A bit at a time

A bit at a time

A Poem by ConnectedWinds

You break my heart off

A bit at a time

With each scornful look

With each broken promise

I build a case to protect it

But now I’ve lost the key

To unlock it

© 2013 ConnectedWinds


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What a great poem. Simply beautiful and so relatable. well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


That will happen.

Enjoyed it.
Scott

Posted 11 Years Ago


ConnectedWinds

11 Years Ago

One can only hope - thanks for the encouragement ;-)
Scott Metro

11 Years Ago

:)
Scott....................
This is so simply honest and beautiful. Powerful. Good work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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