My Own Worst Enemy

My Own Worst Enemy

A Poem by ConfuzzledKidd
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A poem about being your own worst enemy

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I see you all the time, 
Our meetings are intense
And all too frequent, 
You push me into a corner...

Do you know your role ? 
Do you want me to do this forever ? 
Can you leave me alone ? 
I'll do anything 

Pointless seemingly relentless torment.

Stop!
Stop!

I looked in the mirror
"F**k you"

© 2014 ConfuzzledKidd


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I think many of us here on this website can relate to this wonderful poem in some way(I know for a fact that i can). This is an emotionally moving poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ConfuzzledKidd

9 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you could relate to it
It loses it's feeling towards the end but you have a create start. "Our meetings are intense, and all too frequent". I love that, it's lyrical almost.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ConfuzzledKidd

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your comment ! Nice to get some feedback on the writing! I'll keep it in mind for next ti.. read more

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