A Night Rainbow, The Moonbow

Waiting for Love

Night’s Rainbow, The MoonBow

A rainbow glistened in a dark sky

Spreading through starlight

Thunder roared as lonely clouds

Ripped into the atmosphere

Upon my wave of hopefulness

I search for you my dear

 

Miraculous Lights twinkle

Gleaming brilliant colors flow

Into my pleading heart and soul

I’ll wait forever, never to let go

Many years and many days

But nothing changed your plane

 

I danced for sweet rain to bring

You near, for the rare Moon’s

Bow to appear �" now I see

It’s half ring hidden in my memory

 

A hundred different ways to collide

With my propensity to laugh and cry

Waiting for drops to take my pain

Pretending my meek measures would

Make you smile, but life’s too short

For lonely clouds these parched days

 

Longing I asked the moon to come down low,

But the hellcats of hullabaloo said “oh no no”

You need only a mist to see his rainbow

Tenderly embrace our dark paradise

It calls for love’s blissful guise

Author's Note

Moonbow rises at night, rarity: Just thoughts...Thanks in advance for reading/any reviews guidance are always appreciated. I made changes....like this version better. Hope you do...A Moonbow is a rare phenomenon

Reviews

[armin]

Rainbow produced by the reflection of the moonlight, Moonbow, certainly a rare but must be a beautiful natural phenomenon.
Loved your imagery, the first 10 lines are my favourite, especially the given part is more than beautiful,

Thunder roared as lonely clouds
Ripped into the atmosphere
Upon my wave of hopefulness
I search for you my dear.

Well done, dear Dale.

armin. ...

[Indra Neil]

an eloquent and heartfelt write with superb imagery! *claps*

[jeannemarie coulter]

extremely well penned...your images flow smoothly start to finish...sll creating a very blissful guise...thank you...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
awesome!!!
Moonbow is extremely rare........like the true love......or maybe true love coming back, even rarer.....
amzing poem of love and longings.......coupled with nature.....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ben Noah Suri]

Have never heard of a Moonbow and I must thank you for enlightening me. I loved these verses. Especially, "hellcats of hullabaloo" has stuck in my mind

[Fran Marie]

I like the esthetic poetic descriptions of the moon bow within this piece
And the hellcats of hullabaloo line adds a nice touch in the ending verse

Well done, Dale...

[Kenna Marie]

Not only the whole poem, I like the hellcats of hullabaloo part!

[jb]

Excellent poem. Lots of thought in it.

[Iris]

Loved it. You always catch the silent beauty of nature well in your poems. Keep writing, it's valuable. You should publish some.

[sonnie ibadah]

this is too beautiful, Dale!