A Sacred Bond Of Hearts

A Sacred Bond Of Hearts

A Poem by Confuser
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A Sacred Bond of Hearts, A Union of Two

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A Sacred Bond of Hearts

 

A sacred relationship between two

A holy bond of faith and truth

Revered and Strong together life long

A belief that never ends with strife

This is the devotion of our life

For infinity + infinity we will be

Loving constant hearts in sync

O dear, this vow we will keep

Forever together our belief

We make a home of joy and happiness

Like a warm fire, gently tended together

United, we are one not two

For eternity our commitment stirs

For that’s our unquestioning binding word,

Our life immortal with promises from above

Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn

It’s our destiny and what we deserve

Together forever our love will remain strong

Happiness and joy will be lifelong.

© 2015 Confuser


Author's Note

Confuser
A Collaboration With Saddam....a wonderful writing partner. Thank in advance for reading, we appreciate review and advice. Sincerely, Saddam & Dale

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O dear, this vow we will keep
Forever together our belief
We make a home of joy and happiness
Like a warm fire, gently tended together
United, we are one not two
For eternity our commitment stirs
For that’s our unquestioning binding word,
Our life immortal with promises from above
Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn
It’s our destiny and what we deserve
Together forever our love will remain strong
Happiness and joy will be lifelong.
wonderful write from both of you..beautiful lines...keep writing such beauty...:))

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

It was so much pleasant, thank you so much dear Anne. Dale is fabulous artist.
Cathiesblog

9 Years Ago

Love this one...True love lasts forever...the way it is meant to be ..
Confuser

9 Years Ago

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Loved it.. the collaboration of the two of you has produced a fine output.... Its beautiful and romantic. Plus it has a calm and soothing flow right up to the end. Well done both of you :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This image is beautiful. It's like the coconut hut when the coconut leaves and bamboos are weaved tightly together think about the families it has sheltered and the typhoons it has endured but how simple it is constructed. It also reminds me of two halves of a heart mending together forming one whole heart. Thank you for sharing this beautiful imagery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

9 Years Ago

Salomom: very enlightening review, the visual is amazing: I love your view on this composition; I'm .. read more
A beautiful piece of romantic love and commitment. Lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I just looked at this one on Saddam's page and I loved it. Beautiful collaboration :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Dale, a very warm and embracing love story, with loving snippets linked together by hopeful words. This line: "Like a warm fire, gently tended together..." is so seemingly innocuous but so blatantly romantic, such a warm expression that has nothing to do with a fire. When I belonged to Starlite Café I joined in a few collaborations that went well, I think I'd be open to doing one for WC. Very nice result, a wonderful collaboration! take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I never suspected it was a collab. It is conveyed with one voice!
Very well done and filled with beautiful sentiments and gorgeous phrases.
Divine writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O dear, this vow we will keep
Forever together our belief
We make a home of joy and happiness
Like a warm fire, gently tended together
United, we are one not two
For eternity our commitment stirs
For that’s our unquestioning binding word,
Our life immortal with promises from above
Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn
It’s our destiny and what we deserve
Together forever our love will remain strong
Happiness and joy will be lifelong.
wonderful write from both of you..beautiful lines...keep writing such beauty...:))

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

It was so much pleasant, thank you so much dear Anne. Dale is fabulous artist.
Cathiesblog

9 Years Ago

Love this one...True love lasts forever...the way it is meant to be ..
Confuser

9 Years Ago

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Added on May 15, 2015
Last Updated on May 15, 2015
Tags: Love, Faith, Devotion, Marriage, Vows, Commitment, Union, Destiny, Happiness, Peace

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Confuser
Confuser

Manning, SC



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Happily married with three wonderful children. The first poem I attempted was Paper Heart which I submitted here last year. People here have been so kind and encouraging! Their feedback and reading t.. more..

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