A Sacred Bond Of Hearts

A Sacred Bond of Hearts, A Union of Two

A Sacred Bond of Hearts

 

A sacred relationship between two

A holy bond of faith and truth

Revered and Strong together life long

A belief that never ends with strife

This is the devotion of our life

For infinity + infinity we will be

Loving constant hearts in sync

O dear, this vow we will keep

Forever together our belief

We make a home of joy and happiness

Like a warm fire, gently tended together

United, we are one not two

For eternity our commitment stirs

For that’s our unquestioning binding word,

Our life immortal with promises from above

Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn

It’s our destiny and what we deserve

Together forever our love will remain strong

Happiness and joy will be lifelong.

Author's Note

A Collaboration With Saddam....a wonderful writing partner. Thank in advance for reading, we appreciate review and advice. Sincerely, Saddam & Dale

Reviews

[anne]

O dear, this vow we will keep
Forever together our belief
We make a home of joy and happiness
Like a warm fire, gently tended together
United, we are one not two
For eternity our commitment stirs
For that’s our unquestioning binding word,
Our life immortal with promises from above
Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn
It’s our destiny and what we deserve
Together forever our love will remain strong
Happiness and joy will be lifelong.
wonderful write from both of you..beautiful lines...keep writing such beauty...:))

[Confuser]

Thank you sooooo much Anne: Cannot wait for Saddam to see. I am so happy with it, because we wrote it together, I don't mind saying it!!!!

[Saddam]

It was so much pleasant, thank you so much dear Anne. Dale is fabulous artist.

[Cathiesblog]

Love this one...True love lasts forever...the way it is meant to be ..

[Confuser]

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[SleeplessVolcano]

Beautiful words! In an age where people sometimes even "expect" for relationships not to work, it is refreshing to see the "to-death-do-us-part" viewpoint too.....:)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

It touched my heart too, Dale. Being married to my soulmate, having a fine family and a warm home, I understand and feel every word you and Saddam have written. Very beautiful. :) Rudi

[Sheila Kline]

You have melded your talent with Saddam in a way which touches the heart as the reader cannot have reached the last word without feeling the total love and devotion this couple had one for the other.
Eternity, commitment, infinity + infinity, sacred, Revered and Strong are all words that complete the bond! They have been abundantly blessed!!
Beautiful!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such beautiful words....makes me think of my parents....they were married 70 years...what a bond!

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This is warm and cozy like a big hug. Infinite is the hope of love's power. I really enjoyed this read :)

[Jeyanthi]

Hi....
This is heart warming read,
mending calmness...
I felt like feather touched....
It also reminds me of the animated movie UP .
Beautiful work Dale and Saddam. :)

[Confuser]

Thank you Jeyanthi....Never seen UP; Dale

[Confuser]

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[Confuser]

India: you can post the story here: ??? I don't got to unfamiliar links, Would love to read it, however.

[Emily]

WOW! I love this! It's such a loving vow. People who truly adore each other say this. My favorite line was "Our life immortal with promises from above/Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn" Beautiful!

[Mitali Shah]

very good Dale and Saddam. You guys indeed nailed the bonding of two hearts that encounters each episodes in all shades. :) God bless dear.

[Ronny]

"We make a home of joy and happiness
Like a warm fire, gently tended together
United, we are one not two"

Excellent lines that stood out for me, it's all about what love should be.
Not sure what lines is from whom and that's really positive, you work well together in a beautiful collaboration.

Thanks to you both for sharing :)