The Earth's Politician

Thought about greed/politicians/earth/wrote this quickly; a politician last night denied ANYTHING we as humans have done to contribute to the earth adversely; I do disagree; need a balance; changes

Silly freestyle (Politicians/Greed; she is the earth)

It was a rap so I followed the sound,

Like a million centipedes ticking the brain,

Roaming whirling back and forth and around,

A mighty constellation turns this situation,

The growing atmosphere of animosity,

 

Goliaths, word champion liars, demeaning coy deniers

Blazing like fire, raping her body.

 

Narcissist remarks, manipulation feeds their pride,

Their needs to be superior required her to be inferior,

Alpha dog barked, growled and gnashed its teeth,

Speaking as a mythical spirit the tormentors with deep needs

Recognition, if you please, slashing through sinew, like:

World champions of games like degradation, humiliation,

But she knows they are so outranked; (she’s seen it all)

Minds of small character go blinkedy, blink, blind and blank

Rolled over by much bigger think tanks,

 

Dozers and posers, what a stinking pile of infected fruity grocers,

Just roll over red rover?

 

Like the prowling tiger written before her time,

Doubting if it would be to their liking, the delighted deniers,

This tiger is not like you, will hit you between the eyes with the truth,

Eloquent words like disavow, disembody, snippy snarling remarks barked.

Slow and steady, like cooking spaghetti, they look like worms, but the sugar high,

Is right on the line, when synthesized and driven by fresh blue sky lit eyes.

 

Teeth shining like moonbeams, always a smile, a cipher to unlock,

Meter is running and the clock tick tocks,

 

In between those dark eyes, somewhere there’s a tasty stock.  

A single stain absorbed by the rapture of rain that poisoned the bodies,

Tinted once again alive for the first time electrified power hungry fetters,

They gathered together to weather the weather, such conceited fellows,

 

De JA vu, the one that comes first, always the enemy, the kindest, most considerate,

Remember the Godfather, Frances Ford Copula; hit the jackpot, a utopia,

The mobster rules, a code was written, they still follow it too

The freaky demon, he’s there to weave her in his web to keep her lowly and scared?

But she will always escape into the milky way by the light of day,

Through moon beams she follows great and powerful dreams which will highlight

Their lax sacks, lowered and dragging immense cracks - Immature seedlings that never catch,

 

Fractured by weak hopes of rapture, the greedy weasels continue to tap,

Always seeking more, she’ll pick up a garden shovel, bury them in the rubble,

Dance on their graves like a wild and powerful engine roaring down life’s highway,

On a lonely road wondering always where her life’s going she thinks about death,

Knowing she’ll be incinerated, cremated and realizes they may never see,

 

She’s got one smoking hot body….

Author's Note

Someone mentioned rap to me last night, so this am wrote this... stream of thought....Grammar, suggestions, whatever....far from polished, thank you so much for reading and any input. Thanks to Emily for the help!!!

Reviews

[Beccy]

Mankind's greed will in the end be the sword we fall on. What chance this beautiful planet, when already the self servers are selling bits of the moon to the morons who fall for such stupidly shallow con tricks. It's blind and blinkered 'don't give a damn about the future;' and no doubt we will mcontinue to do our best to rip out Mother's Earth's heart.

One day, that 'smoking hot body,' will take revenge. Beccy.

[Confuser]

Beccy: WELL SAID, loved it all! Thank you so much!....Dale

[willweb]

Wow Dale, you have said so much in this, so much truth, hard hitting truth that my mind is dancing to the beat of your thoughts today. This was out of control good my friend.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i love how freely it flowed. yet was so rhythmic.
politicians care about nothing......a well deserved bashing.
this was so cool awesome and profound, all at the same time.
i loved it Mam!!!
:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

I liked each of your stanza . A very different and appreciate able write ! ..the words choosen are also very fabulous !!! .

[Workvio]

This is a very catchy piece illuminating the Rap-hazards of modern man that are said to be harming this earth via modern technology, expansion, and overpopulation ... Simply terminate or exterminate 9/10's of the world's population via some horrendous war or plague, and balance shall be restored once more ...But who wants to be the first one to offer to sacrifice their future and their children in the name of, and for the sake of, Mother Earth? ... You go first ... Enjoyable read, and clever concept ...

[Cool Girl]

You wrote very freely here. It's very different from what you normally write or anything I've ever seen, but I like it. Great job, Dale! You're excelent:)

[Confuser]

Cool Girl, I am new to poetry and am learning from people here; when you say anything I've ever seen, it does make me wonder if it would even be considered poetry; you are talented; don't ever just be kind to me just to be "kind" - just sayin', and it's early I need coffee, so I'm babbling. Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate it so very much.

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:) I don't say things just to b nice...

[R Smith]

I like your free flowing style Dale, the attack on the rapers of this Earth was immensely well done and great Godfather movies to round it off, smoking hot poetry :)

[Sami Khalil]

Your truth is a powerful engine of change and rebuke. Better the greedy weasels learn from the common sense and wise people or they will have their day in court. Hope gathers us under one umbrella when it is storming hard but they want to take that away. Keep highlighting the dream and keep spreading your mighty wings...Excellent...:)...................

[Rene Salinas]

Well not sure if the form will dictate anything at all but for me is a poem in the form of a narrative. I find the links on one had creative on the other a little bit much of a point of deviation as it do indeed work! So I ended up on anather page having to come back to the writing, even though the same page sort of thing..... . The narrative continues and the theme for me came at resilience. Oh the show of Life and the things we must endure yet how do we go through them will have a dirrect impact on what we take out the situations. The lies, the enticements, the rumours, the parodies indeed it felt like a vortext of different situations that one may be put in. Yet when it is all said and done, she is still standing and has a seemingly attractive figure.

Look at her go! then.

Thank you.

[Confuser]

Rene, you know I am inexperienced and very unsure; I wrote this quickly, my notes tell you, but it is tiny and I remembered when you talked of another poem of mine difficulty in reading, like me the small print; I heard a politician say, deny we as humans have not hurt the earth; I awoke and wrote this; Oh, how I wish I could write like you, Emmajoy, MomzillaNC, Sami, jacob, Ms. Jewel, Ana, Ana Sophia, Will, Rudi, Richard, so, so, so many talented people here; I just try and maybe I will get better; I have taken down several poems because I was unsure; but now I hope someone will say; "this is not poetry" whatever; send me a note; I do wish to learn; your vocabulary is so rich, well enough. I am trying....My point is if I wanted applause, I would join the circus. No?

[Rene Salinas]

The problem with that is there are no certain rules. There are interpretations, studies, forms, but within that what you decide. Learning in that context implies studying. It is an individual path. I'm just your peer and my job is to see it from my angle and share it. Best of luck! There are no better and worse.

[Confuser]

That is very kind and encouraging; I truly appreciate it!

[Rene Salinas]

It is all a site thing Dale. I htink if I understand what you are looking for we would require attaching the writing with an (LbL) "Line by line" this site is not conducive to that and if I was to do it on your page it would be extensive. Is not because I wouldn't want to.

[Confuser]

Stonz said to me once; it made me feel better; along these line; people have different tastes; I just do not wish to waste people's time with dumb thoughts; I am inspired so much by what I read; My goal would be to make one person, hopefully more, one day, read something that they enjoy and leaves them with questions/thought -some positive impact. That is really all. You are kind to respond. I do get giddy like a girl when I read; people surprise me all the time; well enough of your time. Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the mobster part...and the part about her smoking hot body, but that is not all she has. she has resistance ---strong resistance---
and she will be surviving long after we are gone, the abusers come and go, but she accepts it all with a smile, knowing she is much stronger than we.

[Confuser]

jacob, you are so wise too; and I agree totally; I'm glad you liked something of it; I just started with sort of a rap; I'll try harder; maybe I should have with such a subject. Just free-flowing thoughts. Thank you so much for reading; I truly appreciate it. Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes free flowing is the best, i say.

[Confuser]

jacob, I wrote this so quickly; focusing on the ignorant politician that denied anything had hurt the earth; just got it on my mind woke up and wrote w/o thinking. Thank you. Dale

[anne]

Like the prowling tiger written before her time,
Doubting if it would be to their liking, the delighted deniers,
This tiger is not like you, will hit you between the eyes with the truth,
Eloquent words like disavow, disembody, snippy snarling remarks barked.
SLOW and steady, like cooking spaghetti, they look like worms, but the sugar high,
Is right on the line, when synthesized and driven by fresh blue sky lit eyes...
I really loved this piece..some lines are amazingly written..excellent job dear...:))