Love Winks

Love Winks

A Poem by Confuser
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love, nature, relationships, anticipation, changes, rituals; whatever you think

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Love Winks

Every morning I walk the edge of the woods,

The rising shining sun winks at me passing behind trees,

We play our game as a ritual or a prayer,

We love our hellos and goodbyes,

Awaiting morning’s glaring flares,

Love is everywhere and nowhere.

 

Playing hide and seek,

I will find you, will you blink a wink?

 

I have become an insomniac, anticipating attention,

but like a train,

I can change my tracks.

To find you wherever you may go,

The roaring whistle of love loudly blows.

© 2015 Confuser


Author's Note

Confuser
Just wrote this morning as I walked with my dog by the forest behind our home. Any suggestions are always welcome. Hope it's alright! Thank you for reading, I so appreciate it. Special thanks to Ana Sophia, she looked it over, gave me the courage to post it. Thanks.

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Loved this one to.
Your rhyming is so great, it seems like it comes naturally doesn't feel forced, which is great.
This seems pretty romantic again, I love a bit of romance :)
but like a TRAIN,
I can change my tracks.
Really liked that part fr some reason, just thought it was cleaver.
Great write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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well I do believe I see a hint of the makings of a love poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


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 wordman

9 Years Ago

I like him too,i`ll be your huckleberry I just thought you was mad at me you was avoiding me
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Confuser

9 Years Ago

It went off!!! I wanted to see the ending and Glen said it went off. Then he was watching John Way.. read more
 wordman

9 Years Ago

no dale not today,just in general it seems you was avoiding me after I mentioned a colab
you a.. read more
You miggled nature and lov together, the product of tenderness, feelings, and nature's clarion call. Your last stanzas carries the weight of this poem. Love is not only found in humanity, nature is a product of love, and has inspired billions of writers. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

9 Years Ago

You are so kind. Onyia-ota, I love nature. My home is in a forest; loads of snakes, but other beau.. read more
Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Honestly I would skip the daytime if I could all the magik happens in the twilights, midnights, and dawns quite frankly this poem reminds me of myself I would wake up early in the morning in the dew stained world and walk through the trees watching the morning sun filter through. It's been a long time since I've thought that memory thank you for refreshing it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

9 Years Ago

So, so kind of you...I love walking in the woods. You review sounds like poetry to me. Thank you!
This is gorgeous Dale! You nailed the title.
Beautiful poem with a playful charm.
You've described a very inspiring morning.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 10, 2015
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Tags: love, nature, relationships, anticipation, changes, rituals

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Confuser
Confuser

Manning, SC



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