Acts

Acts

A Poem by Confuser

Acts

 

She walks through green willows,

Murky rivers channels through her mind,

Old cypresses feeding atop time,

 

Limbs of the willow hang down so low,

Under grounds where her roots grow,

You lie and cut the roots feeding her,

You will die because you deceived her.

 

If she writes your names on her wall,

You meet her and blood falls,

Forked tongued men, reptilian serpents,

Dark divided seasons for no reason.

 

She does not turn the other cheek,

There is release, but no peace.

Sharp tongues and bitter mouths,

Have turned her mind inside out.

© 2014 Confuser


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Wow! This is really a very good poem on human behaviour stray from the nature. Some of words are so harsh that shows the reality of modern world. This is a short and concised piece attracts the attention of common readers too.
Thanks for sharing so lovely piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There really is too much evil taking root in this world.
But I still believe in the goodness. It's just hard to separate what's real sometimes.
Good poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ana for reading & congrats on the award. It was well deserved. Thanks for reading: I bel.. read more
it seems man has defiled the whole world ,with deceit and lies
loved the theme of the write and the methapors

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

9 Years Ago

You are so kind; I'm an amateur. There are some "bad" women too, but speaking as a metaphor, man, o.. read more
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are sweet dale,i am a amateur as well i hardly ever send read req.yes i had a colorful child hoo.. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Write that book - we want to read it. Growing up in the south is quite an experience.
Dale, I really like this poem. The meaning is something I know many will relate to and take a stand with. Lies = cutting the roots that give life...I like that.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 5, 2014
Last Updated on December 8, 2014
Tags: Anger, evil, reconcilation, sanity, earth

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Confuser
Confuser

Manning, SC



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