SCATTER BRAIN

A poem about the inner workings of my thought process.

SCATTER BRAIN

 

                            Discordant thoughts

       Tumbling over each other;

     S

         P

            I

              N

                 N

                     I

                        N

                            G, 

 

Dividing, uniting,

            Dissipating into the abyss.

                     Images-

Recurrent; (RECURRENTRECURRENTRECURRENT)

                               Boomerangs.

         Each lap around my consciousness

  It’s become a little bit different-

    A little more detailed.

A little more vague.

T

  R

     I

       P

          P

             I

               N

                  G  over theoretical situations

That only exist in a land of implausibility.

              Choking on words that are smothered by my tongue

Like alphabet soup.

              Spouting nonsensical metaphors

       With the spirit of a witty rebuttal.

Intangible almosts that resonate within me,

        Yet I cannot touch nor describe them nor decipher their meaning.

                                   Emotions undefined;

                  Unversed lyrics.

      A cacophony of ideas

                             Slathered  with asymptote adjectives;

Word salad.

       Disconnected from the physical world

           Where an apple in hand two seconds ago

Has been lost for years,

                             And the hunger I feel is no longer for food…

 

 

 

 

Wait, what was I talking about? 

 

 

Reviews

[Bohrium Guy]

" Disconnected from the physical world
Where an apple in hand two seconds ago
Has been lost for years,
And the hunger I feel is no longer for food…

Very clever, I enjoyed this piece very much. You did a great job I think. Thanks for sharing!

~Rob~

[Briana Noël Manzano]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! I will definitely be sharing more of my work c:

[Bohrium Guy]

I look forward to reading them as you post.... BTW Thanks for joining my group!

[earthgirl16]

i agree the writing was spectacular, keep going! :)

[Jimmy McRoberts]

Clever and well written piece. Loved how the writing of it fit perfectly to create something very alluring.

[Briana Noël Manzano]

Thank you! :)

[Donald Meikle]

and where did I put that coffee?

[McBear]

WOAH! First off, this was amazing. I loved the way you used the different fonts to emphasize the title of the poem. The lines were deep and amazing. Very clever vocab usage and all! Good job!

[Briana Noël Manzano]

Thanks :3 I really appreciate the reviews!!

[terry smith]

tangents of the mind grow sideways like mint among the weeds some refreshing almost sweet some repulsive and without need...nice writing, I am very impressed!

[Briana Noël Manzano]

Thank you, I appreciate the review! For my first few days being on here, I thought I'd never get any cx

[terry smith]

It was the same way for me! I like your style!

[Daydreaming]

"Choking on words that are smothered by my tongue, like alphabet soup." What a line that was, amazingly written. I loved it :)

[Briana Noël Manzano]

Thank you so much! My first review, and a positive one at that :)