You Did This to me

You Did This to me

A Poem by White Rose
"

Love

"

When I dream

you're there.

You haunt my dreams and my soul.

You swim through my veins

like a fish in the sea.

You linger in my heart.

I can't escape you.

When I'm awake

all I can do is

hunger for your touch.

Your kiss.

Wish to be in your arms.

I long for you

and that is that.

When you're near

I'm complete.

When I'm in your arms

I feel safe and secure.

When I look into your eyes

I get hypmitized.

When you're around

it seems as if we're the only ones.

I feel this way

because I love you.

Very much.

© 2010 White Rose


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Vin
Really great poem, the love within it holds your attention all they way through.

-Beth

Posted 14 Years Ago


Gorgeous piece. I can feel the raw love of emotion in it. I especially adore this line: `"You linger in my heart.
I can't escape you." The only thing is I think you meant hypnotized and not hypmitized. Other than that, it's perfect.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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White Rose
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