What is meant

wrote this some odd days ago but forgot to post it up bc of work so here it is

They were always meant to be

Cant you see?

They way they look into each others eyes

Oh how that look never lies

How they huged and played their little games

All the time sparking a little flame

I look back on the signs that were everywhere

And how now i do not care

I am glad they are together

And hope they will forever

For cant you see?

They were always meant to be

Author's Note

dont be afriad to tell me how it is =P

Reviews

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

It is beautifully written yet sad in a way. How you watch two people and know that they are good together and there are no faults, yet you wish you were that person.

[Angel's Kiss]

seems like you relly like that person

[E-man]

Really, you don't care? Seems as though you do because you're writing about it.. You say you never cared but you seem to bring her or me up a lot in your writings, once again not admitting to you're feelings.. but to get at what this site is meant for... ok the poem has a good rhyme to it I can actually see the rhyme scheme to it and you didn't sacrifice too much feeling to get it, so it flowed through well, I also liked how the first and last line were the same like the repetition and makes the point fairly clear, you have clearly matured a lot.. Well as a writer
just wish your feelings would show up more its between really not caring and jealousy could go either way i guess that could be good to keep the reader wondering what it really was , but yeah I like the piece well as a poem not too sure bout the meaning to it but good write.. I would say the best poem you've writen but i wouldnt say its my favorite

[Seeker]

Sweet poem, but somehow the tone seems bitter to me. Sort of like, "yeah, they're together, good for them!" in a sarcastic manner. But, the persona could be truly happy for them, if that was your intention. The line, "And how now i do not care" can be very misleading. The reader can see it either and any way. Lovely. :) Ambiguity makes anything it so much more absorbing. To me, at least.