Look

Look

A Poem by Nick Almanza
"

Just a short something before im off its gonna suck i know

"

 Look at me im a pitiful mess

Watch me with these lungs that gasp for breath

As you stand, staring at me there

And all I get is a prayer?

Look how i am

How i can be

Something that can be  free

Just a lil push thats all i need !

No, nothing but these thoughts that fill my head

Things  would make people wish i was dead

 

 

Its funny

You only help me out

When im feeling down

On the ground

But when im high

And wanna fly

That is when you say good bye

© 2009 Nick Almanza


Author's Note

Nick Almanza
IT sucks yes i know, Just tell me honestly

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i like the last stanza how you say that someone leaves you when your all happy...high..
ya.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 27, 2009

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Nick Almanza
Nick Almanza

A small one. . . very small, CA



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I dont really like expressing myself or talking bout me. .so here some songs! haha I really like the beat to this one more..

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