you can never hide

This is my first attempt at a poem that rhymes

Watching myself as i cry

As no one caught me comming through the rye

Cutting my skin and wishing i would die

Im tired of everyones lies

Tired of all their spells

Causing all my new hells

Wishing i could stay in my dreams

There no one can hear my screams

My dreams falling to reality

No one can cure this fatality

What is wrong with me?

Cannot anyone see?

My fantasy filled with vampires

It helps me burn these embers

Watching as all this rage

Covers me like a cage

Please save me from this hell

As i see i have fell

Author's Note

yea it sucks i know

Reviews

[ruth]

it is pretty good nick since its ur first rhyming poem, and you know we were textin about writing a poem about a dream, seems you wanna dream about vampires alot. but its kinda depresing
"Wishing i could stay in my dreams
There no one can hear my screams"
mostly people wanna dream about happy things, not scream wen having nightmares
-ruth