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Fast poem

Dont lie

I see it in your eyes

You want me dead

You want me gone

Wth a bullet to the head

To die

And give up

Not cause any pain

The thought of me living

You hate it

Be careful

For you wish may come true

Just fuel to the fire

I dont blame you

Just something to push me over the edge

Now excuse me

Im going to play chicken with cars

I'll see ya

Where ever i go

Down

Reviews

[Madelin]

Life is the best
Life is amazing
So why do people complain
Why do people say I wish I were dead
I don't get them
But one thing I can say
I love my life and never want it to go away
My life is amazing
Its not perfect no
But why do I need to complain
I should be thankful for being alive
Well everyone should
i think it is. lpease what ever you are goin through be mentaly strong and a man dont be a little kid that is goin to kill them self.
you poem well it okay

[ruth]

nick.. dont do anything stupid..please..

[E-man]

goddamit ur a bad emo kid... at least make it rhyme thats what ur poetry is missing..stop being so godamned emo